Re: 3rd fight, any critiquing would be appreciated
Try an have an answer/counter for stuff like some people have said. He had a wild right and you moved and he missed, then when you make him miss, use what he exposes to your advantage e.g body shot him or pivot off so he's facing away from you and he has to turn quickly/off balances himself.
With wild rights too yours was looping on occasion which, of course has its place and can be used, but it seemed to sort of telegraphed it, and he moved more often than not because you could see it coming. Your straight right was good and when you threw it 1.2 bang bang they both connected when you used a straight shot. Use it more mate it was a good shot.
Other than that you look good for 3 fights. Certainly getting better than the two losses.