Re: My first fight - comment/slatings welcome!!
greynotsoold offered some sound advice.
You seemed a bit eager, he was able to walk you onto punches as a result.
All the tall guy had was a right hand, circle away from it, not into it, and jab to the body.
When he was standing still, like he was far too often, you had the opportunity to dictate when, and from what angle to engage, don't just move right towards him.
Last thing was, try to feint to draw his right hand, and throw your own over the top of it.
That said, your technique was better, you'll be able to take guys like that apart before long.