Mundine (and his fans) exposed... - Page 2

one in a million · 10-25-2012, 05:04 AM

Ty is low, he has called many people on this forum rude and crude names so suck it up

peterm · 10-25-2012, 05:08 AM

Classic!

TCboxa · 10-25-2012, 05:10 AM

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Originally Posted by one in a million

Ty is low, he has called many people on this forum rude and crude names so suck it up

ironic you telling me to suck something up Mel.

JOSEY WALES · 10-25-2012, 05:12 AM

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Originally Posted by TCboxa

ironic you telling me to suck something up Mel.

abe01 · 10-25-2012, 05:14 AM

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Originally Posted by oztriker

Certainly...but you have to pm me with names you want included...includining yourself

il start making a list then

fistsof steel · 10-25-2012, 05:21 AM

Sensational effort,and %90 factual.!!!!

Straight Shoota · 10-25-2012, 06:04 AM

So Mundine beats Echols then Echols goes on a losing street and his a bum?..Idiot you are,Seems as though Mundine ended Echols.

Very good though im impressed...Not only do you have no life,but you can sling some rhymes together ..very good son very good.

TheDuke · 10-25-2012, 07:31 AM

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Originally Posted by Straight Shoota

So Mundine beats Echols then Echols goes on a losing street and his a bum?..Idiot you are,Seems as though Mundine ended Echols.

Very good though im impressed...Not only do you have no life,but you can sling some rhymes together ..very good son very good.

Yeah that was a brutal career ending beatdown mundine put on echols

My god if you guys posted this stuff in the general you'd be crucified.

Hmmm · 10-25-2012, 07:37 AM

whilst it is an impressive piece of text, Oz, you certainly do have way too much time on your hands

mrdoctor · 10-25-2012, 08:00 AM

what a piece....nice work oz..u did good...

OZ Puncher · 10-25-2012, 08:52 AM

Oz strikes again.

I pissed myself a little at the mention of Teke's heritage and his troll/alt obsession.

ALTogethernow · 10-25-2012, 08:58 AM

If this did not take you a week to come up with it would be a solid 5/10.
It is also let down by constant butchering of the poems rhythm and stanza that you set out.
For example you start out with for lines per verse, each rhyming melodically and ending in the same sound, with a standard 4 bar rhyming pattern. (ba da da, ba da da, ba da da, ba da). You fail to see this through, chopping and interchanging to only rhyming 2 lines, to even altering between 2 and 5 lines per verse.

A sad attempt, made exponentially worse by the fact the poems where a topic of discussion a week ago, and this is your best shot, something you have worked on for some time....PATHETIC.

james5000 · 10-25-2012, 12:26 PM

Two thumbs up, g you karnts are hilarious. I rate Ty the best comedian of the bunch, but many of you are top class.

whipsy · 10-25-2012, 05:03 PM

Poetry writing is for girls and fags, No wonder Oz Stroker has had a crack at it...

swingin · 10-25-2012, 06:48 PM

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Originally Posted by TCboxa

Trolling ^

you be wanting to breed then...?

View Poll Results: Do you consider this series of verses a true reflection of Mundine and his fans?
TOO BLOODY RIGHT	6	28.57%
Truly a masterpiece of epic proportions	8	38.10%
Oz is a funny fuck (for an old guy)	5	23.81%
I'm one of Teke's alts...and I think it stinks	4	19.05%
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10-25-2012, 05:04 AM	#16
one in a million KMA ESB Addict Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Qld, Australia Posts: 2,708 vCash: 1000	Re: Mundine (and his fans) exposed... Ty is low, he has called many people on this forum rude and crude names so suck it up
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10-25-2012, 05:08 AM	#17
peterm Gatekeeper ESB Full Member Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 338 vCash: 500	Re: Mundine (and his fans) exposed... Classic!
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10-25-2012, 05:21 AM	#21
fistsof steel Contender ESB Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 1,170 vCash: 500	Re: Mundine (and his fans) exposed... Sensational effort,and %90 factual.!!!!
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10-25-2012, 06:04 AM	#22
Straight Shoota Contender ESB Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: Back...Way Backkkkk Posts: 967 vCash: 500	Re: Mundine (and his fans) exposed... So Mundine beats Echols then Echols goes on a losing street and his a bum?..Idiot you are,Seems as though Mundine ended Echols. Very good though im impressed...Not only do you have no life,but you can sling some rhymes together ..very good son very good.
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10-25-2012, 07:37 AM	#24
Hmmm :P ESB Addict Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 2,401 vCash: 1394	Re: Mundine (and his fans) exposed... whilst it is an impressive piece of text, Oz, you certainly do have way too much time on your hands
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10-25-2012, 08:00 AM	#25
mrdoctor Contender ESB Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,396 vCash: 300	Re: Mundine (and his fans) exposed... what a piece....nice work oz..u did good...
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10-25-2012, 08:52 AM	#26
OZ Puncher Champion East Side Guru Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Charlie Zelenoffs Xmas card list Posts: 7,990 vCash: 700	Re: Mundine (and his fans) exposed... Oz strikes again. I pissed myself a little at the mention of Teke's heritage and his troll/alt obsession.
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10-25-2012, 08:58 AM	#27
ALTogethernow Contender ESB Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011 Posts: 678 vCash: 500	Re: Mundine (and his fans) exposed... If this did not take you a week to come up with it would be a solid 5/10. It is also let down by constant butchering of the poems rhythm and stanza that you set out. For example you start out with for lines per verse, each rhyming melodically and ending in the same sound, with a standard 4 bar rhyming pattern. (ba da da, ba da da, ba da da, ba da). You fail to see this through, chopping and interchanging to only rhyming 2 lines, to even altering between 2 and 5 lines per verse. A sad attempt, made exponentially worse by the fact the poems where a topic of discussion a week ago, and this is your best shot, something you have worked on for some time....PATHETIC.
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10-25-2012, 12:26 PM	#28
james5000 Journeyman Join Date: Apr 2010 Posts: 97 vCash: 75	Re: Mundine (and his fans) exposed... Two thumbs up, g you karnts are hilarious. I rate Ty the best comedian of the bunch, but many of you are top class.
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10-25-2012, 05:03 PM	#29
whipsy Belt holder ESB Addict Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Campbelltown, Aus Posts: 3,043 vCash: 500	Re: Mundine (and his fans) exposed... Poetry writing is for girls and fags, No wonder Oz Stroker has had a crack at it...
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