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View Poll Results: Do you consider this series of verses a true reflection of Mundine and his fans?
TOO BLOODY RIGHT 6 28.57%
Truly a masterpiece of epic proportions 8 38.10%
Oz is a funny **** (for an old guy) 5 23.81%
I'm one of Teke's alts...and I think it stinks 4 19.05%
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Old 10-26-2012, 03:56 AM   #46
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If this did not take you a week to come up with it would be a solid 5/10.
It is also let down by constant butchering of the poems rhythm and stanza that you set out.
For example you start out with for lines per verse, each rhyming melodically and ending in the same sound, with a standard 4 bar rhyming pattern. (ba da da, ba da da, ba da da, ba da). You fail to see this through, chopping and interchanging to only rhyming 2 lines, to even altering between 2 and 5 lines per verse.

A sad attempt, made exponentially worse by the fact the poems where a topic of discussion a week ago, and this is your best shot, something you have worked on for some time....PATHETIC.
mine was much better, hey?
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Old 10-26-2012, 03:58 AM   #47
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Brah, that was really lame. What were you thinking?

Don't you have friends/family or a life?

I feel sorry for you and those who genuinely think it was funny.

2/10
Come on 20,strike back for all the believers here with a pro mundine poem
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Old 10-26-2012, 04:12 AM   #48
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Come on 20,strike back for all the believers here with a pro mundine poem
Have you been hitting the turps again Teke?
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Old 10-26-2012, 04:14 AM   #49
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Though it took you a week, to come up with your poem
It was not nearly sleek, bordering on insane!
Too absurd for a tweak to rectify it alone
to repair it a peek with some thoughts from my brain.

Such bastardry of words, emanate from your fingers
It was wholly absurd, you felt your effort worthy.
As aesthetic as curd, so repellent it yet lingers
Best remaining unheard, your talent, a furphy.

Your premise was faulted, twas doomed from the start,
My eyes were assaulted, from reading your text.
youíd neír be exalted, in this form of art!
Itís best that you halted, donít proceed to a next.

Your idol is Danny, sworn to take on the man.
Split decisionís uncanny, with promoters connections
Roach outlined it for many, the amount of Gealeís fans
Gealeís chances, not any, there'll be no circumvention.

A challenge? Not nearly, your leagues from the ceiling
So distant, not near me, nothing can be applied.
Yet you tried so cavalierly, your left failing and reeling.
Your Kinsman harakiri from destruction of pride.
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Old 10-26-2012, 04:19 AM   #50
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Though it took you a week, to come up with your poem
It was not nearly sleek, bordering on insane!
Too absurd for a tweak to rectify it alone
to repair it a peek with some thoughts from my brain.

Such bastardry of words, emanate from your fingers
It was wholly absurd, you felt your effort worthy.
As aesthetic as curd, so repellent it yet lingers
Best remaining unheard, your talent, a furphy.

Your premise was faulted, twas doomed from the start,
My eyes were assaulted, from reading your text.
youíd neír be exalted, in this form of art!
Itís best that you halted, donít proceed to a next.

Your idol is Danny, sworn to take on the man.
Split decisionís uncanny, with promoters connections
Roach outlined it for many, the amount of Gealeís fans
Gealeís chances, not any, there'll be no circumvention.

A challenge? Not nearly, your leagues from the ceiling
So distant, not near me, nothing can be applied.
Yet you tried so cavalierly, your left failing and reeling.
Your Kinsman harakiri from destruction of pride.
Huge FAIL

Only worth doing if it's funny...and you have never been remotely funny.

Try again...But get some assistance from someone with a sense of humour...Try Teke...........What am I saying?
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Old 10-26-2012, 04:23 AM   #51
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Have you been hitting the turps again Teke?
not yet but lookout when I do!!...
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Old 10-26-2012, 04:25 AM   #52
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Poetry writing is for girls and fags, No wonder Oz Stroker has had a crack at it...
You didn't like my Summer loving rendition to you Dale that time Whipsy?
Wish the Berry man would come back.
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Old 10-26-2012, 04:41 AM   #53
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not yet but lookout when I do!!...
At last... A nuthugger with a sense of humour

You and Teke are the only two on here???????....WTF am I saying?
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Old 10-26-2012, 04:41 AM   #54
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Though it took you a week, to come up with your poem
It was not nearly sleek, bordering on insane!
Too absurd for a tweak to rectify it alone
to repair it a peek with some thoughts from my brain.

Such bastardry of words, emanate from your fingers
It was wholly absurd, you felt your effort worthy.
As aesthetic as curd, so repellent it yet lingers
Best remaining unheard, your talent, a furphy.

Your premise was faulted, twas doomed from the start,
My eyes were assaulted, from reading your text.
you’d ne’r be exalted, in this form of art!
It’s best that you halted, don’t proceed to a next.

Your idol is Danny, sworn to take on the man.
Split decision’s uncanny, with promoters connections
Roach outlined it for many, the amount of Geale’s fans
Geale’s chances, not any, there'll be no circumvention.

A challenge? Not nearly, your leagues from the ceiling
So distant, not near me, nothing can be applied.
Yet you tried so cavalierly, your left failing and reeling.
Your Kinsman harakiri from destruction of pride.
LOL that was a bigger fail than your mothers attempts to abort you.
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Old 10-26-2012, 05:15 AM   #55
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LOL that was a bigger fail than your mothers attempts to abort you.


If only his Father had been satisfied with a blow job
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Old 10-26-2012, 05:26 AM   #56
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It was wise to simply leave your rebuttal to the lame phrase fail.
You are clearly well beneath me when it comes to intellect, clear for all to see.
I will speak more clearly in language that is commen to you.

**** you, get a dog up you cunt.
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Old 10-26-2012, 05:29 AM   #57
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I made Ty cry and he reported me to the Mods...as I said he wood.(deliberately mispelled for obvious reasons)

Be gentle with TyÖwho is a little bit odd
Upset him at all and heíll cry to a Mod




Too bad for Ty that the Mods thought it was hilarious

Poor Ty...It must be so hard to be as dumb as dogshit and no sense of humour either.

What a big ****ing girl he is.

Gonna report me again Ty?

I'm sorry if I hurt your feelings...I didn't realise that retards had feelings


I've noticed that TCboxa is guilty of everything he accuses everyone else on here of
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**** you, get a dog up you cunt
Now why would I want to arouse your mother?
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Old 10-26-2012, 08:40 AM   #59
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Mick: I've got a poem for ya.
"You are an idiot,
You are a bitch,
You shit me to tears,
...I'm goin' down the pub."
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I've noticed that TCboxa is guilty of everything he accuses everyone else on here of
Atleast my name isnt BRUAGIRL , guilty of having a dick the size of a tic tac
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