Wages of Blood - short film (about David Price)

The start is very Joe Joyce mode mate - very slow and you need to capture the viewer's attention quickly or they turn off.

Perhaps showing footage of the Pedvetkin and Kebab Kid knocking out Big Dave would get the message across quickly leading to interest in the reality of the aftermath for the fighter in the weeks and months ahead.

This short piece shows there is a good story to be told regarding the big man's career which boxing fans would love to hear in more detail.

 

Fair effort, Mate. I quite liked it.

Thanks for sharing.

 

Nice video! Do you do this full time? I work in film and tv but really want to so more sports based stuff.

 

What about starting off with him doing a plumbing job, let's say fixing the U-Bend under a sink. Then the housewife walks into the kitchen seductively eating a banana wearing her latest getup from Anne Summers.

She says to Pricey "I'm a bit short on cash at the moment but maybe you can give my pipes a thorough bashing with that massive plunger of yours".

Pricey gives a wry smile, stands up and then uppercuts her onto the chopping board.

*Cuts to intro music*

 

I'm genuinely surprised with how that ended. I thought Price was going to be KO'd by the underside of the sink, rabbit punch style, as he was getting up from his knees to see what the wife was wanting.

 

what do you do for work? I’m in the same industry

 

I enjoyed it, a little bit of raw insight! I kinda agree with the first reply. The bit between the old fight and the content was a touch long (for me). I'm on the internet a lot and my attention span is getting shorter and shorter. If I wasn't committed to watching it and had just happened to have stumbled across it, I may have flipped over before it got to the content...or at least skipped the very first bit. But the content I enjoyed.

 

I enjoyed it, cheers for sharing pal.

The footage at the start was something that Dangerous Dave will never find himself in, his gas tank and chin will unfortunately stop him ever taking part in such a battle.

 

Love a price fight.

 

I work in post production as an online editor/compositor. I also used to edit sports highlights. How about you?

 

oh nice! Did you have much involvement in picking music for sports highlights? I’m in camera rentals

 

Oh no this was live sport, cutting different length packages for highlights shows and club channels.

 

That's a tad bit unrealistic if you don't mind me saying mate, Pricey would have been gassed by the time he stood up.

 

I enjoyed that but of course, I'm a fight fan. I know David has a story so I could wait for the film to unfold.
Because of the nature of the sport, every Fighter's story, I think, is worth hearing. Too few want to tell them.