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  1. Boxing First

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    Thought I'd try something a little different, I have chosen a story from this weeks boxing news and given my take on it. This is a new concept for me so very raw but let me know what you think.

    This weeks story is Dominic Breazeales 'threat' to knock out Dillian Whyte.

    Enjoy

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    LoadedGlove Boxing Addict Full Member

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    I enjoyed that more than your 5 in 5 series. It's more relevant, the editorial content was spot on and I loved the Dillian laughing his head off clips.
     
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    Thanks man thought I'd try something a bit different. Gona try working on making my voice sound less scripted!

    Thanks for the feedback though
     
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    ryanm8655 Boxing Addict Full Member

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    Like the idea.

    Some feedback:

    - The music clip looping over and over again was distracting for me, it had a loud jumpy bit every time it looped, a different sample might have worked;
    - the laughing clip was great;
    - don’t agree with your tier 3 guys winning versions of world titles, Browne did but he’s completely shot and wouldn’t have in the current division even when he was prime, he’s irrelevant now. No way Price or Breazeale win a world title.

    keep it up!
     
  5. Jurgen

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    Michael Buffer has been forwarded a few lines for the introductions:

    In the red corner, we give you a plate of custard and apple crumble, we present to you the unremarkable prize pudding - 'Dominic Breazeale'

    In the blue corner, with a 100% win record against all puddings faced, the only slight blemish on his career being PED issues and a humiliating Tony Dosh PPV defeat while fighting injured, he is the Lineal World Pudding PPV Champion - Dulllllliiiiaan Whyte.
     
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    Inglis_1 Boxing Addict Full Member

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    Ummm didn't you used to replace the start of Whyte's last name with an S haha.

    I will admit that I did have a good laugh at this :lol:
     
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    Masterchef knockout?
     
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  8. Boxing First

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    Thanks for the feedback. I will scrap that back in track find something a bit more subtle.

    The tier 3 guys I understand what you're saying. Selection could have been better.

    Your feedback helps me moving forward so I appreciate your time. Thanks
     
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    Lol love it Jurgen

    Guess you ain't Whyte or Breazeales biggest fan then!!

    What did you think of the begining of the video threatening to send the 'heavys' round
     
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    You should have then stuck in a clip of Ronnie Kray in full flow to reinforce the message or even Andy Ruiz bashing Doshy
     
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    Ha! Meant to say I loved the Charlie Zelenoff reference...maybe a couple of clips of him trying to sucker punch people and declaring himself the champ could have added to the humour ha.
     
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