You obviously spent alot of study and time. Thanks for your efforts, I really enjoyed it. We really do love to see the f##kin' KO's, don't we? We are a sorry sort. But, please! Keep them coming! to keep my sorry ass happy!
Well done. I ain't into rap no more but that was well put together. All I think it needs is some scratches on the end of the track. If I was still cutting I would offer to do some for you, cause a couple of years ago I was considered one of the best scratch DJ's one the planet. here's a short clip of a scratch technique I came up with: http://www.zshare.net/audio/76807900ff93b4/ The obvious thing to cut up on your track would be "You got knocked the **** out man!". Hehe. I'd imagine there are plenty of references to "germs" on rap records too, so you could get your name cut up on there also. Overall, good work. Keep on.