ShoBox: Demetrius Andrade vs. Freddy Hernandez RBR

:yep

 

Hey guys, I actually just wrote an article previewig. I've seen plenty of Andrade and I thought he would rocked by a few shots but pull out a unanimous decision. If ya'll wouldn't mind, I'd like some feedback on the article as I am pretty new to sports writing. Any critiscism/critiques would help. Thanks!

http://nyfanhub.com/2013/01/andrade-v-hernandez-fight/

 

"He'll have trouble stopping guys in this division."

true.

 

Yeah but he needs to be matched correctly, otherwise he is going to make for some boring-ass fights.

 

Andrade now mandatory for WBO 154 title.
Baysangurov

 

Swear I heard crickets when they announced Andrade as the winner.

 

did Hernandez really land 99 bodyshots out of 149 so over half his lands were body

 

I'd suggest proofreading or having someone edit it. The article isn't too bad although I think you can eliminate some unnecessary filler. Overall, you probably need some polishing but nothing major.

 

I was already filling them in at the Kirk thread, thinking I might change one score for that one judge without glasses if needed

 

Andrade is very athletic. Can't take that away from him.

 

He only needs to learn (or want) to finish his opponent off.

 

That's a very winnable fight....as long as it's not in the Ukraine.