Critique my sparring please?

Good footwork. You need more head movement or counters to keep your sparring partner guessing.
Keep working. Stay hungry.
I'd like to take a jab at you and say you've been doing this for longer than 9 months though.

 

try to change tempo sometimes, you start to be predictable. and more jabs

3:35 of second video (april 25 1) you needed to cut the ring

overall quality sparring and nice to watch this black guy is very good also and i too wouldnt say that you train 8-9 months :good

 

average sparring pal,,,can give advise but I'm not ,,,your a bull shitter

8-9 months back from a lay off more like ,,,but anyway you look a confident boxer with the flouting jab ,,,etc :vonnecunt
thats what id do to you for lying

 

yeah, i call bull**** too! farv too good for 9 months. idf it is only 9 months youre talented and a c u next tuesday

 

He does look very good for 9 months training. However, most people could achieve similar results if:

They are dedicated.
They are actively trying to improve every session
They love the sport.
They study the sport and try and gain as much info as possible from a variety of sources.
They have a good coach.
They have appropriate sparring.
They train often.
They have decent coordination.

 

A lot of things to point out, but its mainly strategic issues. Just dont be so lazy with your left. Sharper, faster, more pop in it and bring it back properly... The game will flow differently.

 

id say try and come forward with a strong jab just to gain ground and pressure him and when you got him on the ropes and he's getting super low, you shouldn't stop punching. that was a tall guy and he is not built to be doing stuff like that. If you focus on throwing a lot of short solid punches in combinations when you get on the inside and he's moving his head a lot, he's gonna have a really hard time countering but if you back up then he can rip you up with those body shots of his.

 

You need to work the body a lot more.

 

I would have to say that you are a bit of a wanker

 

You pretty good mate- there's no bull**** there that's what you should look like after 9 months. You look like you've been instructed quite well. How many fights has the other kid had

 

Why? That is a great post or have I missed something

 

I don't think it's a great post. Yeah other people could be about as good if they have the things he said and maybe I'm taking it wrong but to me it just seemed a bit unecessary. Taking someone complimenting him and then just turning it around, just seems a bit dickish is all.