initial fight posters for the pac/hatton fight... thoughts?

I've been making some fight posters (well working on 1 so far)...

Pac v Hatton...

I've had 2 drafts... What are your thoughts?

1st draft

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2nd draft - after taking on board some comments

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anyone else got any thoughts/suggestions?

This is the first bit of graphic design i've done in 2 years btw - so i am a little rusty.



all comments welcome (preferably constructive though please )

Thanks

 

yeah that's why i'm not getting paid just yet

it's only a first/2nd draft... i'll probably end up doing a few different style for this fight until i'm happy...

anything you'd particularly like changing or anything?

 

Fair enough.... Why?

Without going on the defensive - anyone can criticise anothers work - but it'd mean a lot more if someone could actually say why, and what they feel need improving...

 

Cheers matey, i'll take a look at bringing ricky out - i prefer the 2nd draft... just trying to decide if there's anything radical i can change it with, or if that style/design has almost run it's course...

 

hmm... the font i may look at - what do you think about the "man" having their respective flags?

would you keep that?

I was planning on having them blending in on the bg - you'd prefer them to be a lot more pronounced - layered above the bg?

thanks btw

 

yeah i did think of that when i was uploading.... only thing i could say to that is that pac is p4p 1 for most people... and ricky is being considered the underdog...

 

hmm, i'll take a look at the results, cheers