Dude. Seriously, join a gym. Learn the basics then come back in 6 months with a video and everyone will gladly take you seriously and give you feedback. This is an amateur boxing/training forum, not a backyard brawling forum.
I'm jealous because a lot of the 10-11 year olds have video cameras now. They get to post the throw downs on Youtube. Who hasn't been in grass fights?
i do enjoy watching two noobs fighting off what they have seen or pure instincts but i would really advice for you 2 to go to a gym and honestly everyone thinks they did good, a good percentage of people on this forum(especially those that never fought) think they are teh godly if i am comparing you two to amateurs of the same age i would hardly give you guys a 2 out of 10