Mundine (and his fans) exposed...

Ty is low, he has called many people on this forum rude and crude names so suck it up :happy

 

Classic!

 

ironic you telling me to suck something up Mel.

 

:rofl:rofl:rofl

 

:good il start making a list then

 

Sensational effort,and %90 factual.!!!!

 

So Mundine beats Echols then Echols goes on a losing street and his a bum?..Idiot you are,Seems as though Mundine ended Echols.

Very good though im impressed...Not only do you have no life,but you can sling some rhymes together ..very good son very good.

 

Yeah that was a brutal career ending beatdown mundine put on echols :nut

My god if you guys posted this stuff in the general you'd be crucified.

 

whilst it is an impressive piece of text, Oz, you certainly do have way too much time on your hands

 

what a piece....nice work oz..u did good...

 

Oz strikes again.

I pissed myself a little at the mention of Teke's heritage and his troll/alt obsession.

 

If this did not take you a week to come up with it would be a solid 5/10.
It is also let down by constant butchering of the poems rhythm and stanza that you set out.
For example you start out with for lines per verse, each rhyming melodically and ending in the same sound, with a standard 4 bar rhyming pattern. (ba da da, ba da da, ba da da, ba da). You fail to see this through, chopping and interchanging to only rhyming 2 lines, to even altering between 2 and 5 lines per verse.

A sad attempt, made exponentially worse by the fact the poems where a topic of discussion a week ago, and this is your best shot, something you have worked on for some time....PATHETIC.

 

Two thumbs up, g you karnts are hilarious. I rate Ty the best comedian of the bunch, but many of you are top class.

 

Poetry writing is for girls and ***s, No wonder Oz Stroker has had a crack at it...

 

:yep

you be wanting to breed then...?