My tribute to a great boxing poem...

Discussion in 'World Boxing Forum' started by Charles White, Sep 12, 2009.


  1. Charles White

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    Ouch man. I may have a new ESB enemy on my hands here.:think
     
  3. kirk

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    wattup charles...


    i like the other ones in the other thread like the one curly posted


    Scorning all treacherous feud and deadly strife, The dark stilletto and the murderous knife, We boast a science sprung from manly pride, Linked with true courage and with health allied- A noble pastime void of vain pretense, The fine old English art of self-defense.



    or the one MIK posted

    The Ballad of Billy Rose

    Outside Bristol Rovers Football Ground –
    The date has gone from me, but not the day,
    Nor how the dissenting flags in stiff array
    Stuck bravely out against the sky’s grey round –

    Near the Car Park then past Austin and Ford,
    Lagonda, Bentley, and a colourful patch
    Of country coaches come in for the match
    Was where I walked, having travelled the road

    From Fishponds to watch Portsmouth in the Cup.
    The Third Round I believe. And I was filled
    With the old excitement which had thrilled
    Me so completely when, while growing up,

    I went on Saturdays to match or fight.
    Not only me; for thousands of us there
    Strode forward eagerly, each man aware
    Of vigorous memory, anticipating delight

    We all moved forward, all, except one man.
    I saw him because he was paradoxically still,
    A stone against the flood, face upright against us all,
    Head bare, hoarse voice aloft. Blind as a stone.

    I knew him at once despite his pathetic clothes –
    Something in his stance, or his sturdy frame
    Perhaps. I could even remember his name
    Before I saw it on his blind-man’s tray. Billy Rose.

    And twenty forgetful years fell away at the sight.
    Bare-kneed, dismayed, memory fled to the hub
    Of Saturday violence, with friends to the Labour Club,
    Watching the boxing on a sawdust summer night.

    The boy’s enclosure close to the shabby ring
    Was where we stood, clenched in a resin world,
    Spoke in cool voices, lounged, were artificially bored
    During minor bouts. We paid threepence to go in.

    Billy Rose fought there. He was top of the bill.
    So brisk a fighter, so gallant, so precise!
    Trim as a tree he stood for the ceremonies,
    Then turned to meet George Morgan of Triphil.

    He had no choice. Courage was not enough
    Nor tight defence. Donald Davies was sick
    And we threatened his cowardice with an embarrassed kick.
    Ripped across both his eyes was Rose, but we were tough.

    And clapped him as they wrapped his blindness up
    In busy towels, applauded the wave
    He gave his executioners, cheered the brave
    Blind man as he cleared with a jaunty hop

    The top rope, I had forgotten that day
    As if it were dead forever, yet now I saw
    Again the flowers of blood on the ring floor
    As bright as his name. I cannot say

    How long I stood with ghosts of the wild fists
    And cries of shaken boys long dead around me,
    For struck to act at last, in terror and pity
    I threw some frantic money, three treacherous pence –

    And I cry at the memory – into his tray, and ran,
    Entering the waves of the stadium like a drowning man.
    Poor Billy Rose. God, he could fight
    Before my three sharp coins knocked out his sight.
     
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    Kirk-Yeah, those are some great poems there.
     
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    the one in your original post is awsome too..... i love boxing poems
     
  7. Charles White

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    Yeah, they are great. I just wish that there were more of them out there that got recognition.
     
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    found one on pac lol....

    by Edgar Rendon Eslit, Philippines


    Manny Pacquiao, Manny Pacquiao

    He fights for his country and the Filipino people
    That’s Manny Pacquiao

    A featherweight, Bantamweight, and Flyweight champion
    World titles itched in the name of Manny Pacquiao

    A pound-for-pound boxer known all over the world
    He is Manny, Manny Pacquiao

    He came from a humble family and made his way up high
    Notably, in boxing world, that’s Manny Pacquiao

    He loves God much as he loves his family and countrymen
    Everyone and every Filipino love Manny Pacquiao

    He sings, acts, billiards, cockfights and plays basketball
    A man of sports, Manny Paquiao

    He finds time to be with the poor giving heartfelt assistance
    A golden mark of a humble Manny Pacquiao

    His strength is from God as he always glorify the lord’s name
    A unique virtue of Manny Pacquiao

    He fights with dedication; he brings pride to the nation
    A dedication, true to the heart of Manny Pacquiao

    Inside the ring, his fans would shout Manny, Manny, Manny
    Michael Butler would valiantly say “Manny Paaacmaaan Pacquiao”

    They say he is a fearless boxer; a champion and a hero
    I say he is Manny Pacquiao, Manny Pacquiao, a true Filipino
     
  10. djm

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    Sorry, but that original poem was pretty poor - no meter, a distractingly random rhyme scheme, some just plain goofiness ("Protecting only their gonads"? C'mon, seriously?). The first one Kirk posted has some merit.

    One couplet from the original that I thought salvageable. If I may (yes, I'm bored)...

    No pinch hitter, no second-string quarterback or backup goalie
    The boxer depends on himself solely
    [can this person keep a beat at all?]

    Let's try...

    No pinch hitter, no backup goalie
    A boxer depends upon himself soley.

    It's not Shakespeare (nor even grammatically correct), but it's a far site better.