come on, thats a bit harsh. for hos second spar i think he looks good. good athleticism. keep it up dude!
Shouldn't be open sparring yet for me mate! Too many things to think about that's why you look terrible compared to a more experienced fighter! If I was coaching you I would make u spar under conditions
Ez up on the kid, he's only 14 and only been training for a month. Just keep sparring/ learn from your coach/ask your coach and watch some tips on youtube.
Move your shoulders into your punches mate, keep your chin down and tucked in. And for gods sake keep your hands still !
Biggest thing I noticed was your footwork, your bringing your feet together way too often, and your kinda moving around more than you need to be which is just wasting energy. Other big thing I noticed was your chin, keep that chin tucked to your chest, your gonna get sparked out keeping it up in the air like that, look through your eyebrows.