~~~The ESB Calzaghe v. Kessler POETRY PICTORIAL~~~

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  1. Dekkers

    Dekkers Team Bergeron Full Member

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    Well I know how much you love the guy :lol::yep
     
  2. Decebal

    Decebal Lucian Bute Full Member

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    :lol: Welcome back, Dekkers!:happy :happy :happy
     
  3. DanePugilist

    DanePugilist God vs God - Death Angel Full Member

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    Waiting drenched coming of train.
    Murmurs pathing through the rain.
    Eager "Hellos - are you going too?"
    Not joining in, head bowed to shoe.

    Settled aboard hyped chatter loud.
    Resounding of brew among the crowd.
    Early of day, eyes close tight.
    Long it be till coming of fight.

    Splashing of water on the ship.
    Liquid bought for the trip.
    Laughter drowned by a belch.
    Not saving up for the welsh.

    Passing of time reach of shore.
    Time to leave beverage store.
    Flocking about danes we are.
    Fakely horned for our star.

    Land of mist coming of sun.
    Stumbling for train in a run.
    Sheep replace noisy cars.
    Puke by one we call Lars.

    Heavy stench in the wagon.
    Lighting of the magic dragon.
    Wisps of smoke all around.
    This is fun, spinning ground.

    Here we are let it commence.
    Ticketless hopping of fence.
    Boring fights more to drink.
    Welsh apart from missing link.

    Now it comes, cheers in crowd.
    Need to sleep coming of cloud.
    Hours pass, waking knock.
    Missed it all, "what the ****".
     
  4. Decebal

    Decebal Lucian Bute Full Member

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    :scaredas: what a nightmare!:barf :|
     
  5. DanePugilist

    DanePugilist God vs God - Death Angel Full Member

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    :lol: :lol: - but a very likely scenario for me. Never mix drinking with other stuff:D .
     
  6. Decebal

    Decebal Lucian Bute Full Member

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    Let us hope that the evening will prove more memorable than you are banking for - an for the right reasons, too!;)
     
  7. DanePugilist

    DanePugilist God vs God - Death Angel Full Member

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    Well, if I don't become like in my youth, that would be possible. What do you think of the poem?
     
  8. Decebal

    Decebal Lucian Bute Full Member

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    I think the poem creates a stong sense of setting and ambiance. The descriptions are raw and economical - the rhythm - jittery swaying - that is why it was so effective in making me feel sick!:lol: A great poem.:good

    :happy :happy :happy
     
  9. DanePugilist

    DanePugilist God vs God - Death Angel Full Member

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    Thanks for the in-depth analysis, mate - I am likewise quite content with it.
     
  10. Decebal

    Decebal Lucian Bute Full Member

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    You have got me used to really quite high quality stuff, so I am not even blinking anymore when I come across the gems that you lay out for us!:bart
     
  11. DanePugilist

    DanePugilist God vs God - Death Angel Full Member

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    :guitar - Well you, Dekkers and New Wind started it - so I better keep up:lol: . Thanks for the encouragement. The entire thread is packed with high quality., even from posters in their first try.
     
  12. Decebal

    Decebal Lucian Bute Full Member

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    I feel I need to start delivering...but you've raised the bar so high!:|
     
  13. DanePugilist

    DanePugilist God vs God - Death Angel Full Member

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    Epic poems takes longer, but yes - bring some more:lol:
     
  14. Decebal

    Decebal Lucian Bute Full Member

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    I will!;)
     
  15. Decebal

    Decebal Lucian Bute Full Member

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