I'm really in no position to give you any feedback as I've never laced up a pair. However I've been watching from my armchair and at live shows for 30+ years. You've got an eye catching style - I'd pay to watch you. The only thing I spotted was your right was a wee bit low when defending - if I'm using the right terminology - he swung that left hook dozens of times but you were slick enough to be out of range, however as you move up someone will seriously tag you with that and we can't tell from this clip how good your jaw is. So I'd say work as hard, if not harder, on the things you don't naturally do well. For me - keep that right hand up a couple of inches.
Thanks for posting that mate. Early days but looking good. Stay on the forum and we'll train you up from here. Three years you'll have unified the div.