Alright dudes hope your ok- I've done this little video because want to bring a little more work in, but rather then show some top class stuff thought i'd put some beginners on and stuff- do you think it works in terms of selling myself as a trainer. I didn't want to put loads of confusing drills on- anyway let me know waht you think - can always change it- but you guys are more neutral then my mates and stuff Thanks [ame]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0DUjz0fmhOk[/ame]
:good:good:good:good:good not qualified to give you advice but looks the business and i like the captions and pics at the end good work
Vids a bit 1 dimensional. Needs you talking to the camera for example. Eg. welcoming, showing your good nature...... Check Stueys vid if you havent, pretty good advert he had done. Think it was Longcounts work.....i think. Am sure they could help you with it. Anyways, you will see what i mean......all the best. :good
Looks good to me. I like how you put the beginners on. I think that anything to difficult may look unattainable to some. I like how you covered the whole gamut of things people want out of any kind of exercise program, and it was about competing not against others, but themselves. I could be completely wrong, but if my assumption is you are trying to sell this to everyone, it may be beneficial to have women and kids somehow in the promo.
^women shouldn't be boxing. I would definitely introduce yourself. Maybe throw down some different angles.
Definitely needs to be more hardcore. You need to get in the camera's face at the end and say boxing things like "YER A BUM!" "Slip the jab!" etc. Here's a few tips on the captioning (what you said---what you mean, and should say): Learn a great form of self defense---Learn how to **** a ***** UP! *Camera cuts to you or one of your boxers...****ing a ***** up...on the street. Get very fit---Become a BEAST in only 20min a day, 3 days a week! Get bitches! *Camera cuts to a conditioning circuit, bonus points if someone throws up. Compete in the greatest sport of all---MMA IS FOR PUSSIES! (or bitches, if you want to make it a theme.) *I'm mostly joking around as you may have noticed, but right here you NEED to show some actual fight footage from your boxers. Challenge yourself---Push your body to its limits and get some gnarly scars (bitches dig scars)! *Back to conditioning scene, or a post-fight pic of someone's face all messed up. Fulfil a lifelong goal *fulfill*)---You've always wanted to do this. Stop being a ***** and sign up now so we can start cracking some skulls! *Maybe a bout scene with one of your boxers getting their hand raised. Maybe put dashes in the telephone number too. It took me a few seconds to realize what it was lol. Good stuff, like how you have newbies in there to to show progression. Def need some kids in there though.
I have one comment! When you are training clients ,the good majority do not want to be hit (go figure). Maybe cut the blocks with the arms. Also check your insurance policy because some exclude any contact to the body or the head regardless of how much padding used. Just a Thought!
