good work, though a piece of professional advice... lose the credits at the start, or have them as produced and peformed by jermz instead of creditting yourself about 4 times. it will make the video seem more professional, for example, in films if its the same writer/director it'll read written and directed by ??? instead of coming up written by ??? and then directed by ???
That's true unless you're doin a comedy and trying to make some laughs. Thoses lyrics were awsome man no joke.
Good video. Loved the highlights; they were very well put together. As an MC however, I'd say you will appeal to Mexicans, but not much else. Your delivery sounds too forced and unnatural. You have a thick accent and your pronunciation is very rough, hard to listen to. You have decent flow and cadence though. I liked your lyrics too; you know your boxing history. Good job overall.
This is truly outstanding work, Jermz. You have a lot of talent, including: Editing video, writing lyrics, laying down tracks and cutting vocals. This was very entertaining to watch. Keep up the good work, ese!